EMOTE ON THIS: Poetry

[jcgoyong]

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I LIVED A LIFE IM GUESSING

ive lived a life of difficult challenges
on where i strive throughout my sadness
ive lived a life full of mystery
in which i moved on with misery

ive lived a life full of wants
on things i can reach and those i cant
ive lived a life full of gamble
hoping in the end - handling ill be able

ive lived a life of wallsand plastics
leaving myself - hopelessly romantic
ive lived a life in a cruel world
a life i held for long, id say its old

ive lived a life of my own secrets
a life i tried not to regret
ive lived a life full of sorrows
in which i wish there wont be tomorrow

ive lived a life of utmost boredom
a life i seeked for the sake of freedom
ive lived a life staring blankly
a life in which i tried to be happy

i guess sometimes we do finish first
and i guess sometimes we laugh with outburst
i guess sometimes we just discover
and most of the time, its just plain OVER

i guess sometimes we get satisfied
but guess it not, we do get denied
i guess sometimes we test the water
and guess whats next to go on ponder

i guess living happy is superficial
since most at time, we express artificial
living is just survival of the fittest
and those who live long, lived the hardest

i guess sometimes the world is a lie
a world extinct, it has long died
i guess sometimes there is too much to hide
and forgetting most of what was kept deeper inside

i guess we all lived in loneliness
its just a side-effect of our hidden sadness
the sadness of living in this unfair world
a soul in contract with death - long foretold

for we are mere objects of despair
to live a life wherein we'll all just disappear
for we are just toys of time
in the end, none are yours and none are mine

so lets live life as cool as we can
as we handle time and just have fun
for what we have are nothing but lies
for all we'll end up with, are saying those sad goodbyes

-jcgoyong 6:06am 8/17/10

i hope you guys who've read this saw the sense of the poem... awaiting your reaction/reflection

[takas bahay]

Very nice Bro! very nice.. Ironic and very real.

You have a talent, keep it up! But I hope you don't mind so much of the negativities in life.

Just like as you stated above:

so lets live life as cool as we can
as we handle time and just have fun
for what we have are nothing but lies
for all we'll end up with, are saying those sad goodbyes

Be cool always!!

[kbOy]

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[angelo_charles]

narrative and dramatic

[jcgoyong]

thanks sa mga comments. karon rko kabantay sa inyo replies ehehe