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Originally Posted by minime
check on grammar and typo errors..... ( the word price in the heading is a transitive verb in the past tense form.....it is not "are priced", but use "were priced" instead )
Most of these bracelets "was designed" (were designed) to be wear (to be worn)
In this collection we have included....... had included
This collection is inspired (was inspired) from the Eden Garden
This is one of our last creations inspired form
All our products are a piece of art and they're all limited editions, which makes them very exclusive!
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