
Originally Posted by
RainDrizzle07
The story of course if made up by an adolescent during one of the days that she feels the world is against her.
Not really she is just expressin on how she felt at that time...while writing this story...
No. I would just like to know on what do you think of the story, how do you feel about it. That's all.
...It's an essay. It did start with once upon a time, but it's more like an essay. Its too early to know which elements are lacking to make it a story. Adult-oriented and negative. It speaks to most people whose got issues like the character. Not a good read for those whose already low...Just my 5 cent's worth.