BOUDOIR - The IPC version (CnCs are welcome)

[alucard_x]

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another share:



ambient light
D700
85mm f1.4
photoshop

Love this shot..good work!!!

[bashblues]

Here is my take on this:
Technical
- Murag lahi ra gyud ang cropping/orientation and it did not work for me cause nawala ang continuity.

Creative
-The eyes are very sexy and IMO you nailed the emotion on the eyes. But I believe it could improve more if you have gestures with the lip (biting lip or sexy smile) anything that would convey more of the sexy emotion.

TFS

Noted Sir..Thanks a lot! If you can C n C my other pics as well it will be much appreciated!

[vanix09]

thank you boss alucard and genghis sa mga critiques. noted tanan. most of all, thank you sa mga appreciations.

Nice take .. pero murag to much ra kaayo ang sking softening sa face.

I like this.

Love this shot..good work!!!

Nice share and here are my takes on this
Technical
- The pose of the arms is a bit stiff IMO.
- You should have taken this on a different angle cause I'm noticing parts of the hips(bulging) and some cellulite on the tummy , I think one reason for this is that she is sitting on the bed. To counter this I would suggest telling her chest up and arc her back to stretch this while sitting. This would minimize or eliminate unnecessary features of her body. BTW She is a stunning model.

Creative
- PP is good and the colors stand out for me.
- The emotion for me is not there basin lang kulang ka sa direction..hehhee


TFS and looking forward for more of your sets.

[waryu69]

Here is my take on this:
Technical
- Murag lahi ra gyud ang cropping/orientation and it did not work for me cause nawala ang continuity.

Creative
-The eyes are very sexy and IMO you nailed the emotion on the eyes. But I believe it could improve more if you have gestures with the lip (biting lip or sexy smile) anything that would convey more of the sexy emotion.

TFS

sir, pls pud kog CnC sa ako work... para naa pud ko ma improve the next time we shoot this kind of shoot... TIA

[vanix09]

another share for today. still hoping for CnCs para ma improve pa ang angayan i improve.

[vanix09]

last share for today. good night.

[alucard_x]

my share!

[IMG] model8 by ryu_nika, on Flickr[/IMG]

[IMG] model6 by ryu_nika, on Flickr[/IMG]

[IMG] model4 by ryu_nika, on Flickr[/IMG]

The first photo - I agree the pose does not work for me. That's why it was not an eye catcher for me. Siguro walang ko ka get sa imo message on this image?

Second Photo - The window light is a good idea, but I don't like her pose. I would suggest directing her to twist her hips and raising her bum para ma-exaggerate the curves sa iyang body. IMO mura man naka slouch siya.

Third Photo - When I see the photo I see my eye is focused at the white wall background even though imo na siya gi-underexposed and for me lang murag this is a misuse of negative space to complement the subject . I suggest try opening up some details in the shadows of the face and hair as well darkening the background wall more.

[edoy]

last share for today. good night.

the iris looks unnatural for this monochrome effect

[edoy]

last share for today. ugma nasad. ^^

a make-up artist is required to conceal skin blemishes on her abdomen

[waryu69]

The first photo - I agree the pose does not work for me. That's why it was not an eye catcher for me. Siguro walang ko ka get sa imo message on this image?

Second Photo - The window light is a good idea, but I don't like her pose. I would suggest directing her to twist her hips and raising her bum para ma-exaggerate the curves sa iyang body. IMO mura man naka slouch siya.

Third Photo - When I see the photo I see my eye is focused at the white wall background even though imo na siya gi-underexposed and for me lang murag this is a misuse of negative space to complement the subject . I suggest try opening up some details in the shadows of the face and hair as well darkening the background wall more.

thanx sa tips sir. taken imu advise. hope to improve next session. thanx jud kau