last share for today. ugma nasad. ^^
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Boudoir Series (Cherry) by Bash Baddong, on Flickr
Here is my take on this:
Technical
- Murag lahi ra gyud ang cropping/orientation and it did not work for me cause nawala ang continuity.
Creative
-The eyes are very sexy and IMO you nailed the emotion on the eyes. But I believe it could improve more if you have gestures with the lip (biting lip or sexy smile) anything that would convey more of the sexy emotion.
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Nice share and here are my takes on this
Technical
- The pose of the arms is a bit stiff IMO.
- You should have taken this on a different angle cause I'm noticing parts of the hips(bulging) and some cellulite on the tummy , I think one reason for this is that she is sitting on the bed. To counter this I would suggest telling her to raise her chest up and arc her back while sitting. This would minimize or eliminate unnecessary features of her body. BTW She is a stunning model.
Creative
- PP is good and the colors stand out for me.
- The emotion for me is not there basin lang kulang ka sa direction..hehhee
TFS and looking forward for more of your sets.![]()
Last edited by alucard_x; 09-28-2011 at 07:21 AM.
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