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he knew there was something different the very first day he noticed it.

it started when he saw his just-departed mother roaming around the house, occasionally giving him a glance and gliding away. but he thought that it was by the grace of Allah, an answer to his prayers that he could see his mother even for just one more time. but this time his heart skipped beats every time he saw her like that, with equal parts of fear and yearning.

"you have a wing, but the other pair is missing," the tambalan told him in front of his father and his sister, as the old toothless husk-of-a-man pressed his palm on the boy's forehead. he motioned close to his ear and whispered, "but you will get it when your father passes away".

that day was the last that he saw of his mother, and in one of her glances he saw her smile at him.

what happened after was equal parts of horror and good luck. he dreams of death, and as his warning always go unheeded, death visits people close to him precisely as he dreamt it. aware but helpless, he would sometimes stay quiet in his waking hours, pretending not to know that those are going to be an aunt's last laugh, a brother's last smile.

trying to escape, he goes from one place to another, seeking refuge from his torment. it seemed whenever he goes and calls it home, lives get better; a new car for a relative, booming business for a sister. but he absorbs everything else; bullets, broken bones, and an tip of a knife in a dark street corner one rainy night.

as he laid there bleeding and alone he asked, "what of my other wing, father?"
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  1. xco0ter's Avatar
    another guy that has "something different" in him almost convinced himself that he's a psychic, a seer and suffered much. he told the one he's praying for "please take this away 'coz i am not prepared for this" and later realized that by using one rare sense that he long have would enable him to move on, he call it - common sense...
  2. Dorothea's Avatar
    My question is: what the heck is he doing at a dark street corner on a rainy night? Everyone knows that when you go tambay2x in a dark street corner on a rainy night...boy, you're asking for trouble. LOL
  3. gareb's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by Dorothea
    My question is: what the heck is he doing at a dark street corner on a rainy night? Everyone knows that when you go tambay2x in a dark street corner on a rainy night...boy, you're asking for trouble. LOL
    there are things called Unavoidables and Necessities. like passing though dark alleys at night, if only to get to safer places.
  4. Dorothea's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by gareb
    there are things called Unavoidables and Necessities. like passing though dark alleys at night, if only to get to safer places.
    Can't you go through that alley during the day? Why on a cold, rainy night? And there so many alternative routes that are safer to get to your destination. No one ends up in a dark alley by accident. Generally, it's just not a good idea to be walking around at night. Unless you're a vampire or a werewolf or a zombie.
  5. gareb's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by Dorothea
    Can't you go through that alley during the day? Why on a cold, rainy night? And there so many alternative routes that are safer to get to your destination. No one ends up in a dark alley by accident. Generally, it's just not a good idea to be walking around at night. Unless you're a vampire or a werewolf or a zombie.
    you should not be asking me. you should be asking the character. he's real by the way.
  6. Dorothea's Avatar
    And why Allah? Shouldn't it be Zeus?
  7. Bigfoot Oracle's Avatar
    One's hesitation is the only tool that can clip one's wing(s).
    Why wait for the father to die when he can grow his wings back and tell the world that he can fly?
  8. gareb's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by Dorothea
    And why Allah? Shouldn't it be Zeus?
    simply because he was, by accident of birth, born a Muslim in the once-enchanted land called Marawi.

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