Critique My Shots Photography Thread

[markyap]

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[img width=375 height=500]http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g297/stickie_notes/chickidies/daniella2.jpg[/img]

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canon eos 3. AV priority mode. +1EV. front ambient halogen lamps. low angle flash study.

critique please.

maybe i would have framed it diffrently but this actually came out very nicely...a little dull on the colour for my taste but the whole look make up for it. the styling is excellent, makeup, hair, etc.! models eyes and expression and pose makes it all come together! bravo

[mamistahay]

... here are my takes on that shot... pasensya na ha... dinalidali ra na... ^_^

Whoaaaaa. Nice in B & W!

[mamistahay]

Whats wrong with this shot?

[img width=500 height=375]http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h121/mamistahay/patsada-karajaw003.jpg[/img]

Sony cybershot DSC L1 4.1 mp.

[markyap]

Whats wrong with this shot?

[img width=500 height=375]http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h121/mamistahay/patsada-karajaw003.jpg[/img]

Sony cybershot DSC L1 4.1 mp.

whats not wrong would make the list shorter it think joke lang po

seriously, to answer ur question...
a big FIRSt is the stupid red date...TURN OFF AUTODATE FUNCTION!
(digital files have embedded date mark that wont show in the image itself/prints and if you want it to show in the photo later you can always add it in a few seconds.)
2) colors are dull.
3) leaves on the top left are out of place.
4) i think its under exposed.
5) lack detail on the background.
6) bad sunset capture.
7) grey sky...minimal cloud detail...
composition could be better...diffirent angle maybe?
9) image is flat and static, dont know whats the angle or what are you trying to show in the photo or what we are supose to be drawn to in the photo.
10) fill flash might give u better forgound details and highlights...
i have more actually but i think you get the picture...
too many things bout the this that could be a lot better...

[Ian]

Yeah.. hahaha.. take away the red date boss..

[CrasHBURN]

What do you like or don't like about this pic?

Too bad.... too bad... i have nothing to critique... its PERFECT! beautiful shot!

[agoroy]

What do you like or don't like about this pic?

nice.. almost perfect .. the only weakness i think is the blue water, it's not because it's blue, because this blue is unprintable on 4 colour process(CMYK), but if you'll print it through inkjet(6+ colour ink cartridge), then it's ok

[laagan]

@CrasHBURN - thanks!

@agoroy - salamat pud, don't know much about printing, I got a Canon inkjet at home which I rarely use now because the damn ink is so expen$ive. Costco is my printer.

[laagan]

How will you improve this shot?

[Ian]

Nothing! Hahaha.. Great shot boss!