Deviant Art Account, Anyone?

[dichromaticbeagle]

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I checked all of your DA accounts... You guys are goooood.

[dichromaticbeagle]

No, she's Audrey Hepburn....hmm...think Breakfast at Tiffany's or...My Fair Lady...or... Sabrina, Roman Holiday, etc...*sighs* Oh well..

Even if i didn't know her, which i do (Wait Until Dark), the name of the
image give it away http://xs29.xs.to/pics/05205/audreyinsepia2.gif

Heheh....I shoud've changed the file name...:P

[dexter]

constructive criticism ni.
... sure ka naa kay talent?

unsa nalang kaha ang destructive criticism no?

[dichromaticbeagle]

Hahahah...you definitely got a point there..

[zerk]

does resemble hepburn.... although she could be skinnier. di ba niwang mana sya?? esp her neck.. maybe you need to work on the stucture of your sketch.

ambot lang bitaw, im not good in giving critiques.

[cmontoya]

Hi dicho,

Are you using grids? If not, then saludo ako sa yo I don't think you are as
I don't see any trace of a grid.

I like the way you did her hair. Hair is my weakness. I can't seem to draw
hair properly.

Although I'm not as good as you, I think there's something wrong with
her left eye (right eye from our viewpoint).

Plus your skilled in handling a charcoal pencil. I never did like this medium. I
end up smudging my drawing. I prefer Mongol 2.

Keep it up. You'll be a master portrait artist in no time.

[keyser_soze]

nice man... audrey hepburn btaw ako 1st guess when i saw it.. but i agree with zerk, dapat mas niwang, but who am i to judge, i suck at portraits...

[dichromaticbeagle]

I know...my bestfriend told me she looked more like Donita than Audrey. Both you, zerk and keyser got it right.

cmontoya, erm...this was my very first sketch on a real person. Um, I don't know anything you just mentioned...-_- Uh, I used staedler 2b pencil and yeah, I didn't have any guides...

Thanks for your comments!

[dexter]

btw, i'm not an expert but if you ask my opinion, you should vary your strokes and the thickness of the lines, The hair, the eyebrows and the eyelashes could benefit more from varying the thickness of the lines. The details are what separates masters from amateurs..

[galenostiel]

ey mga fellow deviants...naa ko pero scribbles lang man 2 puros uy....and almost neglected na...more on d writing man koh...anyways, i'll check your DA accounts ha?

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