mY sO cAlLeD pHoToGrApHy.... (open for C&C)

[t_jay]

Just want to share my personal thoughts on the images you posted.

1. Great scene but the composition doesn't work for me. IMO I would rather compose this 2/3 sea or 2/3 sky.

2. The bokeh for me is kinda distracting, I would rather do a tight crop.

3. Most of the time I notice when viewing landscapes from other photog they tend to "frame within a frame" incorporating foreground within thier landscape shots, like shrubs, trees or viewing to a window. For this I think a foreground is missing to make this shot an interesting image.

4.Not good composition for me.
5. I would rather recompose this shot, incorporating a sense of scale and perspective.
6.no comment
7. I would crop this with less sky and your visual interest has established by the sun and the man on the boat.

TFV and keep on shooting.

Thank you bro for sharing your thoughts, opinion and comments.. I appreciate it... ill take note all of this on my next picture2x... hehehe...

[t_jay]

guys, keep ur comments coming... thanx

[t_jay]

wala nay comments?? ehehehehe

[t_jay]

8

[nunobone]

comment(s)? buy wide lens.. kay murag nahan jud ka ug Landscape hehehe

2) ang eye unta sa eagle ang i focus
4) murag dapat, ubos2x gamay para ma-frame siya sa branches kana kung pwede ^^
7) could've been dramatic kung natunga ang bangka

[t_jay]

comment(s)? buy wide lens.. kay murag nahan jud ka ug Landscape hehehe

2) ang eye unta sa eagle ang i focus
4) murag dapat, ubos2x gamay para ma-frame siya sa branches kana kung pwede ^^
7) could've been dramatic kung natunga ang bangka

wide lens? hehehe.. la pa budget... sunod na lng...
for your comments, thank u... this is appreciated... i'll take note of this for my next photo shoot.

[lemreyes]

Number 8 has potential
Good
-exposure is ok.
-horizon is placed in good position, placed not in the center but in the bottom 1/3
-good use of the beach as foreground

Need Improvement
-horizon looks tilted unintentionally. really watch out for your horizons when shooting landscapes.
-there is really no dominant subject in the composition. the elements are competing with one another (the foreground, sea, clouds and sky, coconut trees)

[t_jay]

Number 8 has potential
Good
-exposure is ok.
-horizon is placed in good position, placed not in the center but in the bottom 1/3
-good use of the beach as foreground

Need Improvement
-horizon looks tilted unintentionally. really watch out for your horizons when shooting landscapes.
-there is really no dominant subject in the composition. the elements are competing with one another (the foreground, sea, clouds and sky, coconut trees)

thank you sa comment....

[blizzaga4]

one of the best ways to compare your shots is to compare it with Hollywood Movies. Trust me they have good as in so good composition and color.

Hollywood movies takes every angle a photographic moment. Try pausing a movie you will know what I mean.

[dbgg1979]

ako ma comment sa imo current landscapes and advice para sa imong next.

watch out for the horizon. don't tilt it. specially if seascapes.. murag ma yabo ang dagat pakilid. ok lang mo tilt2x ta ug tao pero landscapes ambot lang, imho, fail na para nako. daghan ka ani, sige lang, perting daghana sad ani nga sayop if mo adto ka sa thread nga seascapes and landscapes but ari lang ko comment and hinaot maka basa sad sila ani.

but sige lang, dali rana ma fix. try it and you'll see the nga even gamay ra ang tilt, after fixing it and viewing it side by side you will see the difference.

the rest na cover naman ni alucard.

edit. na cover naman sad diay ni nga advice by lemreyes. kana paminaw niya. nindot na iyang landscapes. check his works.