
Originally Posted by
Kind Van de Duivel
To be honest, your poem sounds rather pubescent and predictable. But as they say, "different strokes for different folks".
Anyway dude, tell her about this. Si kinsa'y nasayod, basin pa diay'g mupitik ang iya'ng kasing kasing nganha kanimo, 'di ba? Hehe.
what you say might be true but what i'm after is not how the poems are arranged and also im not after any poet's standards... Didnt you read na beginning? thats why theres a reminder so no one will mistakingly compare my work to any standard...whats important to me is to let the reader feel what I mean in the simplest words... coppish?