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  1. #761

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kind Van de Duivel View Post
    To be honest, your poem sounds rather pubescent and predictable. But as they say, "different strokes for different folks".

    Anyway dude, tell her about this. Si kinsa'y nasayod, basin pa diay'g mupitik ang iya'ng kasing kasing nganha kanimo, 'di ba? Hehe.

    what you say might be true but what i'm after is not how the poems are arranged and also im not after any poet's standards... Didnt you read na beginning? thats why theres a reminder so no one will mistakingly compare my work to any standard...whats important to me is to let the reader feel what I mean in the simplest words... coppish?

  2. #762

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    Quote Originally Posted by blacklight View Post
    what you say might be true but what i'm after is not how the poems are arranged and also im not after any poet's standards... Didnt you read na beginning? thats why theres a reminder so no one will mistakingly compare my work to any standard...whats important to me is to let the reader feel what I mean in the simplest words... coppish?
    Coppish. Apan ngano'ng manuyo man ka?

    Ikaw pa'y gitambagan, ikaw pa'y manuyo.
    Ako ra man nga gisulti unsa'y nabantayan nako sa imo'ng balak. Tsk. Mao gani niingon 'ko "different strokes for different folks". Pastilan.

  3. #763

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    Star
    by:ikarus

    the world is dim
    your words are falling
    the ink tells your story
    i've never ask for anything

    a distorted symphony
    say the lines of nothingness
    they've set the hourglass
    twenty and counting

    if it's too much
    look above tonight
    we're under the same nightsky
    and if love is not happening
    hold on to the memories

    all this time it's you
    you were never a failure
    whisper it to the night
    iam here

    you've always dreamed
    of something far and unknown
    it's the future,your life
    the loneliness of reality

    we're beautiful and empty
    stars amidst darkness
    we'll make it through
    i'll shine it all for you

    all these shall come to pass
    i've seen the dust before
    let's drown together.

  4. #764

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    It’s still love
    by Me

    When I see love and I walk by it
    When I know it's love and I make an excuse
    When I hear love and I ignore it
    To cover my cries and I laugh loudly
    Love, is my love that bad?
    Love brings happiness and but here I am crying
    Why me and why am hurting so much?
    I'd give everything away and if this love was permitted

    When love hurts me and I continue to live
    Wiping my tears doesn't ease the pain
    Love, is my love that bad?
    Love brings happiness but here I am crying
    Why me and why am hurting so much?
    I'd give everything away and if this love was permitted
    Precious things always seem to leave
    So I've kept my feelings hidden

    Your aura is so attracting
    That it causes the drunkenness from your love to get worse
    I live for this painful love

  5. #765

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kind Van de Duivel View Post
    Coppish. Apan ngano'ng manuyo man ka?

    Ikaw pa'y gitambagan, ikaw pa'y manuyo. Ako ra man nga gisulti unsa'y nabantayan nako sa imo'ng balak. Tsk. Mao gani niingon 'ko "different strokes for different folks". Pastilan.
    hahaha la ko manuyo bay wui... naglingaw2 rku reply... anyway naa man ko mga poem sa diff thread... dedicated to o0ella0o na thread... thanx sa pagnotice sa ako poem!!!

  6. #766

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    You're the One

    Is it possible
    That someone like you
    Could complete me?

    You're the only one I want
    The only one I think about
    The only one I truly love

    You've treated me wrong sometimes
    As I've done the same
    But everyone makes mistakes
    And your not one of mine

    Be with me for the rest of time
    I'll give you my heart
    And you give me your mind

  7. #767

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    smoke!!!. unsae meaning anang SPUCH UG CHUPS?

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    very talented!!! lingaw ang obra sa uban hehehe...keep up guyz!!!

  10. #770

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    hmmm poem anyone
    hehhe
    ako ni gihimo para sa girl na ako jud gilove pro sad to say
    nausab iya mind bout the word "US"

    wish i may wish i might
    see your lovely face tonight
    hold it with both hands
    under the same moonlight
    to held you close,warmth
    you with a hug so real and tight
    i throw my to a star so bright
    as it falls my wish would come to life

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