Poetry anyone?

[Hellblazer 2.1]

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sir rodsky, i like your poem. it's very deep.

[Evening Spark]

@balut_man, salamat sa comments ug mga punto for analysis sa akong poem.

I wish I could write Cebuano poetry For that I envy you guys.

-RODION

I haven't written a Cebuano poem about love or emotional pieces.
I did one for Bisdak Blogger in acrostic form.

BISDAK BLOGGER

Bisan unsaon
Ilisdan man ang nawong
Sapawan man ang mga mata
Dili matuis ang atong pag ka bisdak
Angay gyud nga ibansiwag
Kun dili karon kanus-a pa?

Bisdak blogger ko bai
Labaw sa tanan miyembro ko sa Cebu Bloggers Society
Oh mga kahigalaan, mga kaamiguhan
Gihangyo ko kamo sa pag-apil ining
Gamay pero nindot nga pasundayag
EO aw SEO Challenge diay
Regards na lang sa tanan nga misalmot niini.

Note: Those who wish to polish their poetry you may visit this thread here:

https://www.istorya.net/forums/arts-a...challenge.html

Thanks

[cute_me]

when the time comes
and I'd have to go, ahead of you
to that place, that promised place
where happiness is absolute
let me
and while I'm there
in that place, that special place
where everyone calls home
our memories will linger

when the time comes
and I'd have to go, ahead of you
to that place, that divine place
where love is overflowing
trust
that though I'm there
in that place, that happy place
where everyone's enchanting
my heart will stay the same

when the time comes
and I'd have to go, ahead of you
to that place,that blissful place
where fears and tears are never heard of
carry on
for somewhere
in that place, that wonderful place
where time doesn't run out
I'll be waiting for you

when the time comes
and I'd have to go, ahead of you
to that place,that beautiful place
where life never ends
don't fade
for one day
in that place, that perfect place
where everything's perpetual
you'll find me again

-2.14.08
-written for the man i love
-published sunstar weekend

[cute_me]

when heaven calls

when the time comes
and I'd have to go, ahead of you
to that place, that promised place
where happiness is absolute
let me
and while I'm there
in that place, that special place
where everyone calls home
our memories will linger

when the time comes
and I'd have to go, ahead of you
to that place, that divine place
where love is overflowing
trust
that though I'm there
in that place, that happy place
where everyone's enchanting
my heart will stay the same

when the time comes
and I'd have to go, ahead of you
to that place,that blissful place
where fears and tears are never heard of
carry on
for somewhere
in that place, that wonderful place
where time doesn't run out
I'll be waiting for you

when the time comes
and I'd have to go, ahead of you
to that place,that beautiful place
where life never ends
don't fade
for one day
in that place, that perfect place
where everything's perpetual
you'll find me again

Katrine ann galon

-02.14.09
-written for the man i love

[Hellblazer 2.1]

it's very nice. i like it.

[cute_me]

heehee thanks hellblazer. .

[cute_me]

please post your original poems..
please include and introduction, you may state the date you wrote the poem, and why you made it..

[countrykidanthony]

A Poem For My Ex

deep within the shadow of you lies
lies the agony of our once perfect smile

guilty pressures of being love
so you flew like a dirty dove

harken the feeling once belonged to your ex
in time you blew urself u cant be fix

ashtray of my hate is were you belong
but inside my heart you are still my little out of tune song

-countrykidanthony-

i wrote this juz now in time of this posting hehehehe ana jud na basta broken hearted

hahahaha

[rodsky]

(posted this at mindless thoughts before, reposting now)

CLUB MEDIOCRITY

Such a pity that
Canopus...yes the star
Will go on being

non-existent

In their feeble minds

But again who am I
To say such things

I who on all fours can only
Manage to vainly scrape and lick the
Bottom
Of the Socratic barrel

Yet I have seen my grave
I am pleased
For it is nice and undisturbed
Many people shall see it

And seeing me see this, Tutankhamun smiled
I am pleased
For I shall be in good company soon

The good people...
They who speak of
And not speak to
They who think of
And not think to
Who dream of

Not dream to...

...but then again who am I
To say such things

I who reek of Lullian nonsense
Irrelevance
Idiocy
Illusion of magnanimity
An all-trading Jack
In one painful word a
Quack

Oh but Legion is my name
Many are there who play this game
We are all the same
All lame
But there's no one to blame
It's no big shame
We all claim
that one day...ALL shall achieve fame

-RODION, 3 JULY 1998, 11:17:06 PM

[bonjour]

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