6-Day Poetry Scratch Pad Challenge

[hypocrisy]

Sorry for being late.. i've been REALLY busy lately.. .but yes, finally, an escape... here's my semisen entry.. . .


"WITH YOUR GHOST"
-hypocrisy-

I linger inside my head with your ghost
With your ghost
Walking outside heaven's door with your ghost
Carving clouds of smoke into you
My very fingers gently trace
Beneath the blue crescent moon
The outline of your pale face
With your ghost

My days are empty if not with your ghost
With your ghost
My nights, forever haunted with your ghost
Come to me, you faintly whispered
Like a siren's voice enchanting
I succumb to sweet poison
And eternally wanting
with your ghost

Nothing matters when I am with your ghost
With your ghost
Defying dear sanity with your ghost
I can't pretend if this makes sense
But I know I'll find the real you
I'll try to fit these pieces
This illusion to be true
With your ghost

[Sol_Itaire]

^kuyawan jud ko aning imong mga poems hyp...mga spiritual and eternal kaayu hhehehe

[hypocrisy]

free verse entry.. weeeeee

"DEJA VU"
-hypocrisy-

From afar, I watched you close
Studying your beauty, exotic
A picture I painted in my head
As my heart beats chaotic
When you felt my stare in the twilight sun

As I find myself suddenly freeze
Trapped in those elusive eyes, your enigmatic stare
Feeling nothing but you and the breeze
The rhapsody in my veins to bear
Your very essence compels me, i can't run

A faint memory wisps through my mind
I've seen you before as I'm seeing you here
In my dreams,there, you i constantly find
Oh spite! Don't deny this now my dear
Now, this story has just begun

[hypocrisy]

@sol: hehehe..thanks..took me some time..hehe got busy jud.. and i dont find it great writing for the heck of it.. it's nice to write and actually liking it at the same time.. taod2x man ni ~click ang urge..hehehe

[handsoff241]

damn this should have been posted at the istorya.net banner

a lot of my poetry goes to waste due to laziness...

[beyee]

wow... morag ma hypnotize man ko sa imo mga poems hyp

[beyee]

my last piece - free verse


WAIT AND BLEED
by Beyee

Eyes wide shut
I see you haunting me
Ever present in my lucid dreams
Daunting, sucking me back to your life.

In my bittersweet slumber
You held me in captive to a world so exotic
So strikingly mysterious
A fleeting memory that lingers
So brief that I couldn’t even grasp what’s real right before me.

In my waking moment, after fifty-nine grueling days, I’m still here
In constant search of the elusive eyes so dear
Those beloved hazel eyes I’ve been longing to see
But it’s been eight tough weeks, I spent exhausting myself
Endlessly like a lovesick puppy,
I wait and bleed for the next twilight to come and rescue me
When will you ever save me?

05.12.09

[Sol_Itaire]

^ i know why it's 59 grueling days and not 58 ahahha

by June, it will be all about new-found love and bliss

[Evening Spark]

Sorry for being late.. i've been REALLY busy lately.. .but yes, finally, an escape... here's my semisen entry.. . .


"WITH YOUR GHOST"
-hypocrisy-

I linger inside my head with your ghost
With your ghost
Walking outside heaven's door with your ghost
Carving clouds of smoke into you
My very fingers gently trace
Beneath the blue crescent moon
The outline of your pale face
With your ghost

My days are empty if not with your ghost
With your ghost
My nights, forever haunted with your ghost
Come to me, you faintly whispered
Like a siren's voice enchanting
I succumb to sweet poison
And eternally wanting
with your ghost

Nothing matters when I am with your ghost
With your ghost
Defying dear sanity with your ghost
I can't pretend if this makes sense
But I know I'll find the real you
I'll try to fit these pieces
This illusion to be true
With your ghost

You've got a style Hyp!
I admire poets who write dark poems.
The thoughts relate well to the
subject.

The last verse touches my heart
intensely.

Write on!

[Evening Spark]

my last piece - free verse


WAIT AND BLEED
by Beyee

Eyes wide shut
I see you haunting me
Ever present in my lucid dreams
Daunting, sucking me back to your life.

In my bittersweet slumber
You held me in captive to a world so exotic
So strikingly mysterious
A fleeting memory that lingers
So brief that I couldn’t even grasp what’s real right before me.

In my waking moment, after fifty-nine grueling days, I’m still here
In constant search of the elusive eyes so dear
Those beloved hazel eyes I’ve been longing to see
But it’s been eight tough weeks, I spent exhausting myself
Endlessly like a lovesick puppy,
I wait and bleed for the next twilight to come and rescue me
When will you ever save me?

05.12.09

Wow! As I read your free verse, the words simply
slide smoothly in my tongue. No bumps or
flaws I've noticed. The superb emotions grow
stronger in the succeeding verses.

Welll done!