Poetry anyone?

[pac]

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Let's visualize

I know things are hard
but You can flip that card
Lets visualize
Let you mind go someplace else
Where you can find peace
with yourself
And not dwell on the shit
that your going through
Let your mind follow through
Whatever your going through
that will quickly disappear
do you hear?
The more you take your mind of
off it
The more you will break
free from it
Its just a state of mind
You don't have to find
it someplace else
its in you
its been there always
You have to clear your mind
to be able to break free
off this misery
lets visualize

[pac]

Control your dick
put a leash on it quick
Or it might lead you astray
you'll end up sleeping with the hooker everyday
Did you hear what i said
So you want to be a playa
You'll end up dead
Stay away from tricks
Or you might get sick
So you feel like your the man
Coz you've slept with too many women
Better have an aids test
Or you'll be the first one laid to rest
Lust is sin
Makes you do evil things
makes your eyes go blind
makes an ugly girl look fine
we all sin
but the greatest battle of all
is to fight sin

[pac]

Release your anger
Got something to say?
Say it out loud
Don't keep it inside
or it will eat you up
**** you up
mess you up
Like a worm in a pup
Release your anger
Don't hold it in
Or you'll end up cussing
in the morning
Talking bout what the shit
is happening
You'll end up confused
with a short fuse
Never refuse
to release your anger

[LaBelleza]

aww poor pup!
ur a poem machine pac!
btw...i agree with the controlling ur...self one

[pac]

PO WEM

[pac]

Don't let yourself down
What's with that big frown?
There are good days and bad days.
But they will soon go away
felt like you messed things up?
Keep your head up
We all commit mistakes
You need to learn to laugh at your mistakes
Don't be discouraged
God will give you the knowledge
To let go
To anticipate for tommorow

[monochrome_delirious]

naay Creative Writing Workshop sa UP Cebu igka-january.

di palang ko sure kung open to outsiders. mangutana nya ko.

hey! do you have more info on this workshop? interested unta ko thanks

[Kuiaw]

i dedicate this one to shaxrya and kuiaw

Now i know the feeling of how it is being ignored
They say to trust your instincts
then what the hell went wrong then
Does my breath stinks?
Was i too agressive with my approach?
To be treated like a cockroach
Being ignored is like the worst thing in the world
It can shatter a man"s self confidence
But not for me. I didn't feel a single twitch
My heart is like the great pyramid of egypt
It stands the test of time
But when you look inside it
There is nothing there but death and pain intertwine
Pain is like a part of me
It runs in my veins
So the next time you get ignored by a pretty lady
please don't whine

Ahaha! Thanks for the poem, dude. :P No one ever dedicated a poem to me before. Wahaha!

[pac]

well...............theres always a first for everything

[alokethebloke]

I wrote this poem a few months ago and I haven't really shown it to anyone for critiques yet.... please read it and tell me what you think!

Dreamspeak

I begin where you end.

Where consciousness folds and falls
Into the viscous shallows of sleep;
Where, from the potent potpourri
Of thoughts arise the sounds of a scattered symphony,
A requiem for the ruin of reason;
Where the singularity of sense shatters
To let fly the firework of fantasy
Aflame in a sapphire sea of skies;

There I draw you into delight’s dance
Caress you in enchantment’s embrace
Inflame your desires, ignite your fears
Incinerate your impossibilities
I lead you to heights of happiness

Until I lose you to the fog of forgetfulness
And at awakening’s precipice I plummet,
Leaving echoes of a whimsy
Softly lulled by reality
Your inspiration my legacy

I’m your dreams.

And you begin…

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