TS ok kyo imong article but avoid lang anang mga subjective comments such as "of subjects that are
more or less useless in a particular job career".. curriculum subjects present in college degrees are there for a reason man TS.. di mana pwede ang subjectivity sa technical writing or kani nga klase sa writing nga imong gibuhat TS.
i think this should be changed into
"Another advantage of these vocational courses is the minimization or even absence of subjects that have slight relevance to the particular course or job career"
just my two cents..