CRITIQUE: Portraits Only!

[teeemoy]

The way I see it is that the right (camera right) is brighter than the left meaning kusog ra imong softbox. Anyway be mindful lang on what is your Key light and kicker light.

I suggest using selection->Color Range and select the background..its much more efficient if you want to darken the background instead of painting it.

Yeah, you're right. Wa jud ko ka bantay till you mentioned it. Thanks.

Bitaw, someone taught me how to do selection > color range a while back, wa nko paminawa. Hehehe. Sige next time. Thank you, sir. Appreciate your feedback a lot.

[vanix09]

paki CnC sad

[pranchiz]

Not sure why you push a blue strobe gel on the ride side. I have seen your series of her on your flickr and for me this is a bit average. Try changing the white balance to a warm color to complement the blue high light and see it if works

thanks for your feedback! very well appreciated.. =)

[rafaelgandi]

Foe me I would prefer this to be B&W. Expression is good and eyes are tack sharp. I would say good take.

Thanks sa feedback

[johnmangui]

Pa kritik pd ko ani mga brothers in Christ.

[alucard_x]

Pa kritik pd ko ani mga brothers in Christ.

dli ko sure mano nangutkot na siya, another pose may work..anyway nice take

[joieboi]

ako din...

[johnmangui]

dli ko sure mano nangutkot na siya, another pose may work..anyway nice take

hahaha! mao sad, ni kupot na xa sa iya head sir. tnx sa comment sir. mwah! haha

[dranoel]

birahi

[sevmik]

I'm not sure I understand what you mean, pre. you mean kanang murag halo effect? or the light on her skin?

if ang halo effect imo pasabot, sa photoshop rana. i masked the entire layer to make the black background more black, then deselected the model so that mu balik ug hayag ang exposure.

if ang light sa skin nya imo pasabot, it's the way i lit the model, 2 soft lights on either side, then one light 45 deg left w/ beauty dish, and one light 45 deg right w/ softbox.

Ang halo effect akong pasabot, I thought it's because of the lighting, hehe. Thanks for the explanation bai.

Aside from distracting elements sa background in my view murag sayop ka butang sa reflector. Distracting lang kaayo ang strong shadow sa nose.

Noted sir. I'm not really into portraiture so di kaayo ko suhito mogamit sa reflector. Will do better next time, thanks sa inputs sir.