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  1. #41

    Default Re: For Charisse (A Poem)


    Quote Originally Posted by peter_d_silent
    Ako na nahatag niya gahapon ang letter... I placed it in her table sa laboratory before nagsugod amo klase, then I went back to the lecture room. Later I saw her read the letter, and she smiled when she read it. Gisiryoso kaha niya ang ako sulat o she just took it lightly? Sige lang, basta nabasa na niya... Pero nakuyawan ko kay basin kabalo siya kinsay naghatag... I'll see her again this afternoon, and I don't know what will happen... As I've promised in my letter, I'll just keep my distance.
    mission accomplished!!! :mrgreen:

    she is a dolt if she wasn't moved with what u penned.

    if word gets out that u gave it to her, expect things to be not-as-smooth-as-before. i told you about consequences, i hope u are ready to face them IF those things happen.

    love on!

  2. #42

    Default Re: For Charisse (A Poem)

    Quote Originally Posted by enlighten
    nice au imong mga poem maka-in love....btw i hope she likes ur poem.....mas nice mangud mag write if inspired ka or kun dli depressed...
    thank you

  3. #43

    Default Re: For Charisse (A Poem)

    Quote Originally Posted by mhai...07
    wooossshhhhh nmn..
    gwabe ang haba..huh,,.!!!!
    kakalaglag panty nmn..hhehhe,..
    galing nmn ng poem mu..
    at swerte nmn ni charisse poetic mu!!!! :mrgreen:

    okie ka tol..
    u got a great poem..
    im sure nahan pod c charisse ato..
    nahan mn gani ko na its not for me how much more ang ghatagan ato...
    hehehe... thanks ha... grabe pud kag reaction da...

    bitaw taas ra kaayo, pero dili naman gud mapa-mubo pa... i had too many things i wanted to say...

  4. #44

    Default Re: For Charisse (A Poem)

    Quote Originally Posted by wayuk
    mission accomplished!!!Â* :mrgreen:

    she is a dolt if she wasn't moved with what u penned.Â*

    if word gets out that u gave it to her, expect things to be not-as-smooth-as-before. i told you about consequences, i hope u are ready to face them IF those things happen.

    love on!Â*
    hehehe... dolt?Â*

    i think kabalo na siya ako naghatag... how wala koy idea!... basta ma-feel nako nga kabalo siya, kay gahapon sa klase sige siya tan-aw nako... with that knowing look... patay... sakspan nako...Â* wala jud ko kabalo giunsa niya pagkabalo... basin nailhan niya ako agi kay nakapaphoto copy naman siya before sa ako notes...Â* buking...

    gahapon nag-moving exam mi sa laboratory, and usually first batch jud na siya mu-take sa exam... gahapon she told her friend nga 2nd batch na lang daw sila, so nagkadungan mi take sa exam. she finished first, then ako.. paggawas nako sa room naa siya sa gawas naglingkod kuyog isa niya ka amigo, naghulat sila sa ila friend pud nga isa. casually i approached them, sat near her and actually chatted with her, about how quick the exam was, how hard it was, etc... my goodness... it was overwhelming for me... she smiled at me while we talked and i smiled at her... it was heaven... pero taud2x nigawas na ako migo niingon siya nga maghinay2x nalang mi panglakaw kay human naman and exam....Â*

    i wanted to be there with her longer, pero ako migo nanghagad na nga manglakaw nami... alang2x pud muingon ko nga una lang siya... obvious na kaayo nga naa koy lain tuyo...Â* so off i went without even excusing myself from her... i didn't know what else to say...

  5. #45

    Default Re: For Charisse (A Poem)

    Quote Originally Posted by peter_d_silent
    i wanted to be there with her longer, pero ako migo nanghagad na nga manglakaw nami... alang2x pud muingon ko nga una lang siya... obvious na kaayo nga naa koy lain tuyo...Â* so off i went without even excusing myself from her... i didn't know what else to say...Â*
    whoa! hold it right there...

    u still with ur gf?

    careful with ur heart and everybody else's whom u'll be treading on, kid. love's elation is addictive but it wouldn't be nice if u leave a string of broken hearts to ur name

  6. #46

    Default Re: For Charisse (A Poem)

    lagi.....Â* Â*

    i was carried away by the moment, good thing my friend saved me...

    pwede magpa-heart transplant na lang

  7. #47

    Default Re: For Charisse (A Poem)

    If Things Were Different

    If things were different
    I'd like to ask you
    to go on a trip with me

    I'd like to travel
    far south with you,
    to ride a bus
    and to go to places like
    Argao, Santander, and Bato

    I'd like to see the sea
    with you,
    to smell the breeze of
    the ocean with you
    and to sail on a boat
    with you
    to Sibulan in Negros

    I'd like to see the wind
    blow your hair

    And I'd like to see
    the horizon of Negros
    Oriental with you,
    to see the shape of
    its mountains
    from afar

    I'd like to roam
    the streets of Dumaguete
    with you,
    and in the Boulevard
    I'd love to sit with you
    in a bench that faces
    the bay, to watch the sun
    set in the horizon,
    to see the afternoon sun
    bathe your beautiful skin
    and your beautiful lips
    with its golden light

    I'd love to hop from one
    island to another with you,
    see the small, quiet, and
    quaint Siquijor
    and its centuries-old
    churches,
    and Bohol,
    to see the serene Loboc river
    and the busy Tagbilaran
    City

    I'd love to be on a ship
    with you, when it's night
    time,
    and I'd love to shiver
    in the cold and
    see the waves, white with
    bubbles, as the ship
    breaks the sea into two

    I'd love to listen
    to the crashing of the waves,
    so soothing,
    and to look up the night
    sky,
    at the stars shimmering
    in the distance

    I'd love to shiver
    and to be warmed
    by the knowledge
    that you are near

    If things were only
    different




    Today's the last day I'll see her...Â*

  8. #48

    Default Re: For Charisse (A Poem)

    Sigh, ikaw jud Peter
    Ka swerte ba anang Charisse jud uy...

    You're really love stricken,
    Sige lang gud naa na bitaw ka GF,
    Why don't you just pour your attention on her?
    Si Charisse lumalabay raman na siya...

    Sakto biya si wayuk...
    Quote Originally Posted by wayuk
    careful with ur heart and everybody else's whom u'll be treading on, kid. love's elation is addictive but it wouldn't be nice if u leave a string of broken hearts to ur name
    Peter, pwede mo borrow sa imong poems pls? ^_^
    I'd like to show this to someone else...

  9. #49

    Default Re: For Charisse (A Poem)

    you're right... i really feel so guilty about this. i love my gf very much, and i feel so bad i've done this behind her back. this will never happen again. i will guard my heart.

    yes, this is just a passing thing. i'm already starting to get over C. i must move on.

    Peter, pwede mo borrow sa imong poems pls? ^_^
    I'd like to show this to someone else...
    sure oi, ok ra... i'm very much flattered...

    kinsa diay imu tagaan?

  10. #50

    Default Re: For Charisse (A Poem)

    waaaaa!!! ka breath taking ba ani oi!!!! as in!!! tanan nimong poems akong giread jud!! atuts!!! i know how it feels..

    i sent something like that to my crush before..but gituyo nako ug send sa iya atong pasakay nako sa barko padinhi sa cebu coz i dun wanna see his expression, i might melt and totally forget my logics...i also dont want us to have any lovers' relationship thats y ako tong gitiming, i juz want him to be aware that i still like him and i wont change until i meet someone better thatn him....

    right now i can talk to him face to face because after 5 yrs of secretly loving him, i found the person whom i think is 10x better than him,...but sad, he's taken.....actually i would even wonder if d sha taken....he is almost the perfect figure that would make a girl fall in love....

    also, dont worry too much about how she will feel after reading ur poem....i was sent something like that before although, ang gihatag sa ako kay story na weekly moabot...i even wait during mondays na muabot to...then i learned who sent those...my classmate,.. pero nothing changed... i even appreciate him for doing such a sweet thing....

    pero ikaw, my dear friend, ayaw na na palahutaya ha! ur gf will get hurt.....

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