Kwela Nobela : Chapters 42 - 43

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Short Film Coming : Negative One
" Ang Pagbabalik "
Chapter 42

ANIMAL RIGHTS
PART 2

(showing a fisherman in a ship throws a dynamite in the sea and then, explosion)
(beach side)

< Mia > : ama ko, kailan nyo ba titigilan ang iligal na gawain nyo? bakit hindi nyo po maisip na, mapapadali ang pagkaubos ng mga isda dahil sa winawasak nyo pati tirahan nila, huhuhu
(enter Anton)
< Anton > : anong nangyayari dito?
(enter Christoper)
< Christoper > : nangyayari dito ay ano?
(sound of audience clapping)
< Mia > : huh? sino kayo?
< Anton > : sino kami?
< (close-up) Anton > : ako ang gwapong-gwapong si Anton
< (close-up) Christoper > : at ang mas gwapong si Christoper … ako yun
< Anton and Christoper > : at kami ang …
('explosion!')
(earthquake follows)
< Anton and Christoper > : … BOMBA---!!!
< Mia > : please, kung sino man kayo, pakikumbinsi ang ama ko na, itigil na ang masamang ginagawa nya (nakahawak sa braso ni Anton)
< Anton > : (awkward face) close ba tayo? wag mo kong hawakan (pumalag)
< Mia > : (angry face)
< Anton > : (pinagpagan sarili)
< Christoper > : Detective Anton (nod once)
< Anton > : Detective Christoper (nod once)
< Christoper > : (nod once)
< Anton > : (nod once)
< (close-up) Christoper > : (nod once)
< (close-up) Anton > : (nod once)
< (close-up face) Christoper > : (nod once)
< (close-up face) Anton > : (nod once)
< (close-up eyes) Christoper > : (nod once)
< (close-up eyes) Anton > : (nod once)
< (close-up eyes) Christoper > : (nod once)
< (close-up eyes) Anton > : (nod once)
< (close-up face) Christoper > : (nod once)
< (close-up face) Anton > : (nod once)
(they are now on the ship)
< Christoper > : (nod once)
< Anton > : (nod once)
< Christoper > : (nod once)
< Anton > : (nod once) (and so on...)
< Father > : (awkward face) … papanong nakalangoy kayo dito? hindi man lang nabasa mga damit nyo … sino kayo!?
< (close-up) Anton > : sino kami? (look at the camera) ako ang gwapong-gwapong ...
< Christoper > : Detective Anton! tignan mo, sa dagat!
< Anton > : ..!
(showing fishes that are floating dead on the sea)
< (close-up face) Anton > : walanghiya ka!
(then showing a hand guiding Anton's chin to other direction)
< (close-up face) Anton > : hayop ka!
(showing again a hand guiding Anton's chin to other direction)
< (close-up face) Anton > : isa kang walang puso! pagbabayaran mong lahat-lahat ng mga to!
(normal view)
(Anton is facing Christoper in an angry manner)
< Christoper > : … (then guiding Anton's chin to Mia's father)
< Anton > : narinig mo!? magbabayad ka!
< Father > : ha! yan ang akala ninyo … mga tauhan!

(then a group of fisherman go beside Mia's father)

< Men > : (laughing at Anton)
< Father > : ano nang gagawin nyo ngayon? ha, ahahahaha, ahahahaha...
< Anton > : Detective Christoper, ako nang bahala dito (then humarap sa mga mangingisda … nagbukas ng coat)
< Fishermen > : aah---!!! (nagshield ng mga mata) yak! kadiri!
< Christoper > : good work Detective Anton, ngayon … (nagsindi ng dinamita) tanggapin nyo, sariling bomba nyo! (inihagis sa mga mangingisda)
('explosion!')
(then showing the fishermen … puro maitim na lahat)
< Fishermen > : uh (isa-isang nagtumbahan lahat)
(tapos nang tumawag sa cellphone si Anton)
< Anton > : … pulis na ang bahala sa kanila ngayon Detective Christoper
< Christoper > : napaelib mo ko kanina sayong ginawa Detective Anton, saan mo natutunan yon?
< Anton > : ang alin? eto? (binuksan yung coat nya sa harap ni Christoper)
< Christoper > : …

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Short Film Coming : Negative One
" Ang Pagbabalik "
Chapter 43

(may malaking salamin si Anton sa loob ng coat)
< Anton > : ginamit ko ang araw para masilaw silang lahat
< Christoper > : ..? (tumingin sa itaas) pero Detective Anton, wala namang araw, sobrang maulap ngayon
< Anton > : ganun ba? siguro'y, napangitan sila sa kanilang mga sarili kaya, nagtakip sila ng mga mata … ang papangit kasi nilang lahat
< Christoper > : as usual isa ka talagang tunay na henyo Detective Anton
< Anton > : alam ko yun Detective Christoper, pero … (tumingin sa dagat) pano na tayo makakaalis sa lugar nato?
< (close-up) Christoper > : Detective Anton
< Anton > : … (tumingin kay Christoper)
< Christoper > : (nod once)
< Anton > : Detective Christoper (nod once)
< Christoper > : (nod once)
< Anton > : (nod once)
< (close-up) Christoper > : (nod once)
< (close-up) Anton > : (nod once)
< (close-up face) Christoper > : (nod once)
< (close-up face) Anton > : (nod once)
< (close-up eyes) Christoper > : (nod once)
< (close-up eyes) Anton > : (nod once)
< (close-up eyes) Christoper > : (nod once)
< (close-up eyes) Anton > : (nod once)
< (close-up face) Christoper > : (nod once)
< (close-up face) Anton > : (nod once)
(they are now in the beer house already … a woman is dancing in the background)
< Christoper > : (nod once)
< Anton > : (nod once)
< Christoper > : (nod once then look at the place)
< Anton > : (still nodding to Christoper)
< Christoper > : … Detective Anton
< Anton > : (nod once)
< Christoper > : nandito na tayo
< Anton > : (nod once)
< Christoper > : Detective Anton nandito na tayo!
< Anton > : (nod once)
< Christoper > : (sinampal si Anton) nandito na tayo!
< Anton > : (look at the place) oo nga noh … Detective Christoper! uminom na tayo!
(then three beautiful women na naka-two piece approach them and give them beer)
< Anton > : yeah!
< Christoper > : woo!
(then they toast and drink with the ladies)
(end of film)

(other location)
(temporary subtitle)

FULL MOON
CHANGE OF MEMORY

(inside the kubeta)
(Ann and Christoper is covering their noses)

< Mia > : dito nga
< Christoper > : akala ko gimik lang to ng school para sumikat
< Ann > : walang matinong school ang gagawa ng ganitong advertisement noh!
< Mia > : kailangan kumpirmahin natin muna kung tunay ang mga tae dito
< Ann > : hindi pa ba patunay na mabaho ang …
< Christoper > : (pinigilan si Ann then nod 'no')
< Mia > : (humarap kayla Ann na may tae sa kamay) … okey, titikman ko na
< Ann and Christoper > : (nandiri face)
< Mia > : (kinain yung nasa kamay) … tae nga, tae nga tong mga to
< Christoper > : sa palagay ko, walang ganitong tae ang pusibleng meron sa isang araw lang … baka yang pader lang ang may tunay na mga tae
< Mia > : tama ka, kailangang tikman ko rin ang banda don
< Ann > : Mia!
< Christoper > : (pinigilan ulit si Ann then nod 'no')
< Mia > : (sumalok ng tae sa ibang pader tapos, kinain) … tunay din, tunay din mga tae dito … ngayon, banda don naman
< Ann > : (hinarangan si Mia) Mia tumigil ka na!
< Mia > : umalis ka dyan!!! (tinulak si Ann)
< Ann > : (bagsak sa sahig)
< Christoper > : ..!
< Mia > : (tumakbo sa ibang pader, nilamutak mga tae)

(later … outside the CR)

< Ann > : … hindi ko na talaga alam ang gagawin sa kaibigan kong yon
< Christoper > : … (tumingin sa relos)
(then may lumalabas ng mga tao sa CR)
< Mia > : hindi pa ko tapos! hindi pa ko tapos sabe! kailangan ko pang malaman lahat ng impormasyon sa CR na yan!
(hinihila palabas ng dalawang security guard)
< Mia > : ikaw! (tinuro si Ann) kasalanan mo siguro to noh! kasalanan mong maldita ka! ba't mo sila tinawag ha!? ha!!!
< Ann > : Mia (then iyak, may luha)
< Christoper > : (pinatatahan si Ann) … pakilayo na po yan
< Mia > : ayoko! ayoko!!! bitawan nyo ko!
< Ann > : (umiiyak)
< Mia's voice > : bitawan nyo ko sabe!!! gusto ko pang kumain non!
< Christoper > : kuryentihin yan!
('bzzt---!!!')
< Mia's voice > : aah---!!!

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From AUTHOR's Notes
< delay > : hello readers,
Facts About Short Film Coming
# 6 ... here are some of the messages I received so far in the second story up till now
I would like to share my point of view to all of you and feel free to comment more after reading this, taanx
= Reader's Corner =
@ SiakniSiak

okay

nice lang ba
@ tUs0

Kabadingan pala .!

variety of comedy is good...
@ SamLowry

W.t.f.i.t.s?

I'll pretend you didn't mean " what the fuc5 is this s#it? "
instead, you just said
Where The Flamingo Is The Source
of this amazing story?
why thank you kind sir ... just click below FOR ALL CHAPTERS
@ Oneiros

I am not the TS's agent or editor so I am not obliged to give constructive criticism (for free).
With that said, after 3 chapters, I can honestly say I've read better crap.

ey!
you sons of *****!
just joking ...
well at least your taking notice of my work and I thank you for that you guys

We do. It's just that the Networks are more willing to fund the cliched, banal, crap that everyone can relate to rather than taking a risk with those good stories that might not sell as well. That's why I find it great that the digital film boom has empowered indie film makers (with a decent story to tell) to reach a larger audience even with a very low budget.

yeah, I hate cliched stories too you know, and that's why this is my revenge to the society fill with people who makes cliched stories and show it to millions of people ... the shame
cliche stories are gay

I am not the TS's agent or editor so I am not obliged to give constructive criticism (for free).
With that said, after 3 chapters, I can honestly say I've read better crap.

the story I've made breaks all the barriers of telling one story, one place, one setting even it's only a one title novel
no my friends, it is super awesome
don't read 3 chapters and then criticize
it's bad ... it's not nice
read the whole novel and then criticize
at least tell me what's really up with my story
that's all
... " just keep your day happy, hmkay "
@ salermo

After reading 3 chapters, we might admit being had.

< Christoper > : dalawa na sila delay, baka naman totoo
< delay > : ...
@ sophion

we filipinos dont know how to weave a good story.
and our movies suck.

you suck sophion, you suck
@ salermo

Whenever I go to get my kare-kare and dinuguan at my nearby little Filipino store and a turo-turo (fingerpoint ) restaurant, I cringe when I hear their overhead T.V. with all the tear-jerkers going-on.

well salermo of not-in-the-philippines, I assume you are in abroad or somewhere, I just can say this that filipinos of wherever you are, are still in touch of their own heritage (you know, even if they suck), and for that I salute them
by the way, my favorite turo-turo ulam is bopis ... have you tried that?
@ Frake_5000

mukhang susubaybayan ko na 'to...hehehe! habang binabasa ko yung bawat lines naiimagine ko sa isip ko yung eksena eh. Good work talaga, sir!

actually nasagot ko na tong reply nato dati nung first story pa lang
ito yung naging reply ko...
" gumagawa lang ako ng panibagong approach sa pagbabasa ng novel
nagke-create lang ako ng illusion na parang pinapanood sa screen habang binabasa nga lang ...
gets mo? 'wink' 'wink' "
tapos may nag-reply ... si JosephSensei
Nice story, maari nangyayari ito sa totoong buhay.
@ dark202328

ako nga din eh na imagine ko ung habang ginagahasa si brenda

hahahaha! natawa talaga ako sa reply mo
@ dark202328

my tanung lang ako, naguguluhan lang ako sa kanila trivor at nelso? sino ba sakanila ang bakla.

ano sila um, discreet, or something ... di ko rin alam eh
actually nakuha ko yung ideya ng profile ni Nelson nung nabasa ko sa TV forum yung salitang bisexual, discreet male only
nung una hindi ko talaga alam ibig sabihin nung salitang discreet
meaning pala non, " maingat "
ang psychology yata nila, straight-acting sila pero mas prefer nila kapwa lalake
@ Frake_5000

Ang lupet ng istorya...gusto ko yung ganito. Parating aabangan yung bawat lines. Ibang-iba! Galing mo, sir. Ikaw ba mismo author?

taanx Frake_5000
at yes, me is the author
original at kakaiba ba?
I myself find it very different from anything I've encountered
pero inin-corporate ko lang yung mga napapanood ko sa TV tulad ng southpark
@ mcrory

LoL d ko maitindhan anu yan?

its a novel sir
first timer ka pa lang kasi kaya mahirap pa sayo ma-absorb yung contents
pero once nage-gets mo na, you're gonna find yourself laughing mag-isa
its weird kasi nabiktima rin ako
@ -CliFfs|.hEnSki

katamad lng basahin lol

pero kung pagtyatyagaan lang daw talaga, its totally worth it
reply ni ... aki
" ahahah.. pinatyagaan ko talagang basahin...hehehehe!! nakakatawa "
@ wardestroyer

d nakaka enjoy basahin amf...pero thnx na dn sa effort

ganun ba
@ cock-a-dudle

ang haba tapos ang pangit ng font.
kakatamad basahin O_O

naisip ko tuloy na landian at lagyan ng colors mga letra ko pero
ganitong improvement na lang siguro < name > :
" its the content that counts na lang "
@ ~Xylitol~jAm

lahat cla cnbi katamad basahin bwahaha

oo nga eh, nakaka-depress
@ wardestroyer

isang napakagulong istorya....ngunit talagang magulo

may nakalimutan ka pang word ... magulo sya
@ [eL]Carim

1. No one reads it , so why post
2. why do you need to post them in different topic, you can just update it on the first thread

1. meron naman ah, sa 31 hits dati na view at least kalahati non nag-aabang ng next chapter
2. different topic kasi para ma-minimize yung volume ng contents nitong nobela
nakakatamad daw kasi para sa mga baguhan na nagbabasa
@ ~Xylitol~jAm

copy paste imba to

( ito yung comment nung nagbabatukan sila Anton at Christoper )
yun kasi yung signature character nila sa video project na yon
@ best_pick

wahashahahahahahaha

taanks best pick, nakakatawa ba
mas matatawa ka sa idiniagdag kong character sa nobela, si Lola
keep on reading okay
@ carlporn

mabasa nga to minsan
mukang maganda ah
wala bang summary to??

summary nya is umiikot yung istorya sa buhay ng grupo nila Christoper na kumukuha ng college course ng film making ... bukod sa istorya ng mga buhay ng characters, mababasa din yung mga video projects na ginagawa nila as a group
click mo lang yung link sa baba ng FOR ALL CHAPTERS para mabasa mo yung buong istorya
@ darkralf04

its kinda cool o_o

parang 2 out of ten?
... meron nga palang hidden facts itong nobela kung bakit hindi nabigyan ng mahusay na hustisya yung mga estudyante na pinatay sa second story
disturbing pero classic case sya ...
@ miss.winter

ANU B TOHH??
I DON'T GET IT
SORRY

@ Uruki_takiko

...?
....di ko ma gets...

typical love story novels lang kasi nakasanayan nyo kaya medyo nawi-windang kayo sa out of this world kong nobela
@ cutie26

,,ano ba yn ang gulo...tpx gnyn pah..xorry sa author pero la nmng kwent ung story tpx bxtos pa...

may kwento kapag binasa ng buo syempre
and for the censory comment, almost wala talagang gumagawa kasi kaya i'm just offering another angle for a variety of readers na gusto ring makabasa sana ng ganitong mga situations
you know in an amateur way
@ ragefire09

Pwede!
Tingin ako sa source mo.

taanx ragefire09
taanx din sa 10/10 mo
@ maldita

Wow, mukhang maganda ata ito aabangan ko to linggo linggo!

try mo ring basahin yung previous first Chapters
nasa second story na kasi ito eh
... taanx sa pag-read, yaan mo, ga galingan ko pa story nato para mapasaya ikaw
@ kaxcleax73

galing mo talaga nakkala ko tagal pa launching now na pala ehehhehe..tagal mag load ng vids binibitin ako heehhehe...
n e wez..congrats sa season 2 ng kwela dyaryo

huh?
kwela nobela kuya hindi kwela dyaryo po, at saka tagal mag-load ng vids?
parang wala yata ako non
... pero taanx sa congrats
@ charlie harper

hahahaha!!! ayus yung kwento

ayos ba kuya
@ charlie harper

naalala ko yun kaibigan ko na ngayon na sa middle east na fan ng descendents, ramones, face to face, nofx, etc. mahilig sya sa mga kwento. typical mahigit sa lahat entertaining

well hi na rin sa kaibigan mo abroad
... sabihin mo na rin sa kanya, pasalubungan ka ng babae mula abroad
@ NewYorkCubaoHardCorn

@delay: maganda kwento mo kaya lang bitin--kulang sa seks en bayolens. dagdagan ng kahit katiting na libog at dugo

dude good news meron na, read mo Chapter 32 - 35
Terrorism Awareness Part 2
nandon *** and violence mo ... enjoy pare
P.S.
balat ba ng tunay na tao yung maskara mo?
kung oo, pabili ako ng dalawa
@ BongBong

@delay - maganda kung gagawan mo to ng blogspot... para macompile mo mga kwento mo

actually meron na, click mo lang yung link below FOR ALL CHAPTERS
dati ginawan ko to ng blogspot sa friendster pero madalas nagloloko
kaya gumawa na lang ako sa free forum ... mabilis at madaling mag-navigate na
i-check mo kuya
@ thomasstuart

Hi Dear.
I have recently join this site and this is nice idea for providing us information about Kwela Nobela. Would you mind to let us know more about this? Thanks!

this is a story of fictional situations behind the stepping stones of future film makers
although none of these are real nor based from truth to life people, the concept of this is to extract the humor out of a very very sad topic and turn it into a positive thought that anyone could relate and understand
@ Oneiros

Since I'm feeling nice...
My Zen master says that while good art inspires, great art on the other hand offends. So I'm a bit amused by your attempt to satirize/trivialize serious topics like AIDS, cancer, homosexuality, etc. and it reminds me a lot of The Sarah Silverman Program or It's Always Sunny in Philadelphia. However that's where the similarities end. Dialogue is stilted and suffers from unnecessary exposition. Pop-culture references are thrown in with no discernable purpose aside from just being added into the mix. And there seems to be no overarching theme from the few chapters I've read so far, though this isn't that big of a disadvantage if you intended each chapter to be self-contained rather than be part of a coherent whole.
And it goes without saying, if you really believe in your work, edi wag ka masyado mag-paapekto sa iyong mga kritiko. Take whatever you found useful in their criticism and don't take it personally.

since I'm feeling nicer ...
and I don't have a slight idea of what you have said...
but I love the show it's Always sunny in Philadelphia
my favorite episode is when they burned Deandra while saving the kittens, on cam
actually, my inspiration in writing the story is Southpark
I'd like to capture its nastiness at the same time being hilariously funny
and about that coherent whole your talking about,
actually it is divided in a two to three pages of bond paper microsoft office word program ...

And training. Everyone needs training.

mukha mo training

<< Updates of new Chapters once a week >>
enjoy people

# 6b ... after I finished posting the first story, there's this ronwits dude gave me a message that said and I quote " Nice kwento. Love it. Na print ko na chapters nya."
... take that Oneiros!!! in your face! in-your-face
") meron akong hardcore fan
plus there's this two other guys that is both curious about me if I'm a scriptwriter or something ... I told them, " no I'm not "