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Vital Spark of Heavenly Flame
(Alexander Pope)

Vital spark of heavenly flame
Quit, o quit this mortal frame!
Trembling, hoping, lingering, flying!
O, the pain the bliss of dying!
Cease fond...

sorry no offense meant. but i read classic prose and poetry and i can't help compare your compositions here with those i've read. sometimes, the grammar is plain wrong, or the ideas just don't...

sorry no offense meant. but i read classic prose and poetry and i can't help compare your compositions here with those i've read. sometimes, the grammar is plain wrong, or the ideas just don't...

IF the music was so loud, then how come I DIDN'T hear it...

the tenses of your verbs are inconsistent.

hmm...you dont need to say "has passed" anymore. yesterday already denotes that the day has come and gone.

The last line is a paradox. Dont think if you want to ignore.

Life sucks for those who think it sucks. As they say, you receive from the world what you give to the world! Thoughts become your reality so use them well!

stand still and clear you thoughts! It is a mote to disturb the mind's eye sometimes.