Comic book drawing club/Comics movement here in Cebu!

[john__amor]

Totally up to you where you put them, dude. As long as people see what you have to say and learn from it, I'm cool. If you post your comment on my site, maybe you can link people to it through here.

[Santini]

the Shocker by ~Santini on deviantART

posted another one. hit the link.

[john__amor]

Cool! I was the Joker and I didn't even know it.

[HoundedbyHeaven]

Hmm, I think I'm going to put it here so that anyone who reads it who hasn't gone to your website may be interested to do so. I'll have to register my criticism one at a time, I think. I have to reread my thoughts on your thumbnail sketches a few weeks ago to make sure I'm not repeating anything (as I'm prone to do).

For the first page: well, I just thought that it would have been better if the onlookers are first shown to the reader from inside the vehicle in the third panel. It would have made the reader even more curious as to what strange event in the sky these people are staring at. I know you shifted to a worm's eye view to show the dog also being riveted to the same scene up in the sky as with the onlookers, to make the object of their attention more poignant, intriguing. However, you could still render it the way I suggested above and maybe have the dog on top of the back of some parked truck (maybe even have the mutt placing its front legs on the rails to elevate itself)-- that would really make it more intriguing.

Also, it would have been better had the truck been speeding along still in the same third panel, as it appeared otherwise in your drawing.

The other panels are just fine.

[HoundedbyHeaven]

Quote: Originally Posted by Santini the Shocker by ~Santini on deviantART posted another one. hit the link.

I love this scene-- this is where I think Bats truly defeated the clown.

[john__amor]

I actually thought about putting the camera inside the car in panel 3, to show the bystanders through the windshield. But I decided to use the worm's eye view instead, so that I could show that the tires were stopping. Maybe a sound effect could help out. I dont know, but that was my way of doing that. That was my way of showing that the car is coming to a halt or at least slowing down. The dog is actually not important at all. He can lick himself for all I care, LOL. Thanks for the analysis, man.

[HoundedbyHeaven]

Quote: Originally Posted by john__amor Maybe a sound effect could help out. I dont know, but that was my way of doing that. That was my way of showing that the car is coming to a halt or at least slowing down.

Yeah, a sound effect would deal with that just fine.

Quote: The dog is actually not important at all. He can lick himself for all I care, LOL.

Hahaha. And here I thought the canine was central to the concept, hehehe.

Quote: Thanks for the analysis, man.

You're welcome.

[zerk]

@santini and JOhn

nice bai, kulang nalang si kidflash, aqualad and wondergirl.

[john__amor]

Yeah, and we can have Teen Titans: Year One na! Haha! Maybe Vemp or Suede can draw the rest. Anybody is welcome to add to that piece. It'd be great.

[Santini]

and i hate what DC is gonna do to Wally in the upcomng Flash: Rebirth.

[zerk]

buhi ba to balik si barry allen?? wala na ko ka update sa comics.

[vemp]

I'm game for a Teen Titan's thing. Sige, I'll draw.. hm, I dunno. Raven siguro, or Starfire. It's depends.

[zerk]

titans - year one, vemp.


wondergirl lang. hehehe old school...

[Santini]

Rhino by ~Santini on deviantART

hit the link.

[diem]

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