6-Day Poetry Scratch Pad Challenge

[Evening Spark]

Quote: Originally Posted by beyee @ don -- lols payter man pod amo mentor don, si spark hehehe

Ahammm....(heart is pumping fast.)

[hypocrisy]

waaahhh.. .ill post my entries tonight..
@spark: thanks for the clarification..and the comments..appreciate them. And HOORAHH pencil pushers!!!hehe

@sol: thanks for doing the google on the terms. think of us also ha?..hehe
@beyee: (OT)m feeling the summer heat man nuon..so hot..hehe
@don: post some of your words on paper here also..

[Evening Spark]

The round 2 will be on June 2009.

New Rules:

1. All Istoryans can join.

2. Visitors can post or participate, provided they must follow the exercises. Although they take part of the challenge, they are not entitled for the prizes.

3. To be an eligible challenger, one must enlist their names.

4. The exact date will be announced later.


Note: Prizes will be revealed soon.

To enlist, simply quote this post and show your interest in joining.

Questions and comments are as always welcome.

-spark-

[Sol_Itaire]

Quote: Originally Posted by Evening Spark The round 2 will be on June 2009. New Rules: 1. All Istoryans can join. 2. Visitors can post or participate, provided they must follow the exercises. Although they take part of the challenge, they are not entitled for the prizes. 3. To be an eligible challenger, one must enlist their names. 4. The exact date will be announced later. Note: Prizes will be revealed soon. To enlist, simply quote this post and show your interest in joining. Questions and comments are as always welcome. -spark-

but of course i'm joining!

@Spark i will submit the free verse today. ngita sa kog inspiration

[beyee]

Quote: Originally Posted by Evening Spark The round 2 will be on June 2009. New Rules: 1. All Istoryans can join. 2. Visitors can post or participate, provided they must follow the exercises. Although they take part of the challenge, they are not entitled for the prizes. 3. To be an eligible challenger, one must enlist their names. 4. The exact date will be announced later. Note: Prizes will be revealed soon. To enlist, simply quote this post and show your interest in joining. Questions and comments are as always welcome. -spark-

count me in!

[Sol_Itaire]

FREE VERSE


Fading
by: Solitaire

‘You’re just a memory,’ I tell myself
Drowned by the tears in my heart
Blurred by the chaos in my mind
Slowly drifting into my subconsciousness.

Closing my eyes to think, there's no recall
Promises of love dissipate
Warmth of hugs and kisses escape
Quickly fading into the twilight of my dreams.

I see you now and then; it’s quite strange
Perceived as exotic, conflicting
Never meeting those elusive eyes
Not a glimpse of your soul without defenses.

What used to be ‘us’ is in the distant
Growing dimmer by the day
You’re just a memory, I tell myself
Laid to rest in the abyss of forget.

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[Evening Spark]

Quote: Originally Posted by Sol_Itaire FREE VERSE Fading by: Solitaire ‘You’re just a memory,’ I tell myself Drowned by the tears in my heart Blurred by the chaos in my mind Slowly drifting into my subconsciousness. Closing my eyes to think, there's no recall Promises of love dissipate Warmth of hugs and kisses escape Quickly fading into the twilight of my dreams. I see you now and then; it’s quite strange Perceived as exotic, conflicting Never meeting those elusive eyes Not a glimpse of your soul without defenses. What used to be ‘us’ is in the distant Growing dimmer by the day You’re just a memory, I tell myself Laid to rest in the abyss of forget. .

All the prompt words are present and are
properly used in your work. This is an emotional
piece.
Very well written.

[Evening Spark]

is on Tuesday at 12:00 noon.

I will announce the winner on the same day at night.

Once again, write on and have a happy day.

-spark-

[Sol_Itaire]

Quote: Originally Posted by Evening Spark All the prompt words are present and are properly used in your work. This is an emotional piece. Very well written.

Thanks, Spark.

[beyee]

ok noted spark...

[hypocrisy]

Sorry for being late.. i've been REALLY busy lately.. .but yes, finally, an escape... here's my semisen entry.. . .


"WITH YOUR GHOST"
-hypocrisy-

I linger inside my head with your ghost
With your ghost
Walking outside heaven's door with your ghost
Carving clouds of smoke into you
My very fingers gently trace
Beneath the blue crescent moon
The outline of your pale face
With your ghost

My days are empty if not with your ghost
With your ghost
My nights, forever haunted with your ghost
Come to me, you faintly whispered
Like a siren's voice enchanting
I succumb to sweet poison
And eternally wanting
with your ghost

Nothing matters when I am with your ghost
With your ghost
Defying dear sanity with your ghost
I can't pretend if this makes sense
But I know I'll find the real you
I'll try to fit these pieces
This illusion to be true
With your ghost

[Sol_Itaire]

^kuyawan jud ko aning imong mga poems hyp...mga spiritual and eternal kaayu hhehehe

[hypocrisy]

free verse entry.. weeeeee

"DEJA VU"
-hypocrisy-

From afar, I watched you close
Studying your beauty, exotic
A picture I painted in my head
As my heart beats chaotic
When you felt my stare in the twilight sun

As I find myself suddenly freeze
Trapped in those elusive eyes, your enigmatic stare
Feeling nothing but you and the breeze
The rhapsody in my veins to bear
Your very essence compels me, i can't run

A faint memory wisps through my mind
I've seen you before as I'm seeing you here
In my dreams,there, you i constantly find
Oh spite! Don't deny this now my dear
Now, this story has just begun

[hypocrisy]

@sol: hehehe..thanks..took me some time..hehe got busy jud.. and i dont find it great writing for the heck of it.. it's nice to write and actually liking it at the same time.. taod2x man ni ~click ang urge..hehehe

[handsoff241]

damn this should have been posted at the istorya.net banner

a lot of my poetry goes to waste due to laziness...