Hey, Johnny "The Man-Love" Love, I got a question 'bout your thumbnails that would lead to a suggestion.
That second page, the splash one, are those flying things I see there some of the dragons invading Asgard? If so, I suggest that it would be creatively better to not show them dragons in that page yet, only their shadows or the wind their wings kick up on those puny humans below. This would heighten the tension of the moment. Remember that scene where the shadow of the flying Nazguls pass over the battle on the fields of the Pelennor when Rohan was keeping the forces of Mordor from taking Gondor?
Peace.
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